Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Get to grips with the IELTs sample writing task 2 with this example crime essay!

IELTS Sample Writing Task 2 – Model Essay Answer

Crime is unquestionably one of the most prevailing and worrying aspects in any society, and its prevention should be taken seriously. Crime prevention can be executed in various ways, firstly through a sustained honest presence in the community and secondly through international cooperation.

A local presence by incorruptible law enforcement authorities may be costly, however, the long-term investment would pay dividends in the future. A safer region would encourage trade, investment and set an invaluable example for younger generations. For example, crime has dramatically been reduced in the Favelas around Rio de Janiero in Brazil. This was achieved largely through the government committing large funds of money to stationing police headquarters in and around the slums. These financial expenditures greatly benefited the community.

Secondly, due to the large-scale severity and the global impact that crime has in some areas of the world, global cooperation is critical. Operating in a different way would incur significant financial losses and render any expenditure futile. For example, Somalian pirates in Africa have reigned terror amongst many ocean transport companies in the area. Only through large-scale international cooperation was policing the area possible. Therefore, crime reduction can be attributed to a joint effort between countries.

To conclude, illegal activities are a costly and dangerous fact in the present global economy; however, through large-scale government investment prevention is an attainable goal. Also, spreading the expense through international cooperation the resources invested can be significantly more effective in reducing criminals’ effectiveness abroad.

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3 Comments

  1. Yulian June 13, 2013 at 1:24 pm - Reply

    @Victor
    “Crime is a big problem especially for poor country, because they haven’t money be prevented”

    The crime is a big problem because the country is poor, not because they do not have money to prevent it.

  2. Rajeev January 26, 2013 at 12:04 am - Reply

    Equally important is to also understand the reason for crimes. May be curbing the reasons helps in long run.

    Secondly what could be a crime (any thing for which authorities pose fines) in some countries (e.g. Singapore is I have heard a strict country) may pass un-noticed even in some other coutries.
    categorization of crimes is subjective.

  3. Victor January 13, 2013 at 3:45 am - Reply

    Crime is a big problem especially for poor country, because they haven’t money be prevented. If any country not prevented crime will worsened.

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