In this tutorial, ex-examiner Robert looks at IELTS Task 1 writing tips for describing two maps or plans.
In this specific type of Task 1 essay, you’re asked to compare two maps or plans or a kind of “Before” and “After” task.
This type of essay has a lot in common with the statistical elements we see in pie charts and graphs. But, instead of looking for trends by comparing numbers, we are comparing two-dimensional plans.
We discuss:
- Four important tips for writing essays describing plans
- Sample IELTS Task 1 Question about describing two maps or plans
- Sample Answer to IELTS Task 1 Question with ex-examiner’s review
Four important tips for writing essays describing plans in IELTS Task 1
- The most important thing to mention is the most striking changes. Take a minute or so to look carefully at the information presented to you. Take note of the major differences or changes you see between the two plans
- Know the right verb tenses to use. Some questions may have a futuristic element to them, for example: What will the downtown area look like in 10 years’ time? You should be very sure of which verb tenses you need to use because there’s a possible mix between present and future tenses.
- In your answer, make sure to not only describe the changes but also explain why.
- Remember the overview. It’s a great idea to mention something important right at the end.
Sample IELTS Task 1 Question about describing two maps or plans
Here’s the task question. It’s taken from Cambridge IELTS 16, Test 3.
Here are the plans
Sample Answer to IELTS Task 1 Question with ex-examiner’s review
There are 4 paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: Introduction
The plans provide details of proposals for the renovation of Southwest Airport which compare the current layout of the departure and arrivals areas to what they will look like when the work is completed next year.
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The first sentence paraphrases the question. Here the examiner will be on the lookout for your ability to paraphrase using appropriate synonyms. So, we have
- “provide details of proposals” for the original “show the…”,
- “the current layout of the departure and arrival areas” for the original “the site of an airport now”
- Using information in the question and in the diagram, “what they will look like when the work is completed” for “how it will look after redevelopment”.
Notice also how we can use the present tense ….
- ”when the work is completed” ….to refer to future events.
Paragraph 2
In general terms, the main new features will be an expansion to the number of gates together with a range of new facilities such as shops, an ATM and a car hire service.
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The second paragraph provides a general overview of the information.
- Make sure you show the examiner that you have clearly identified the most important features
- Write the most important features you identified in very simple, clear terms.
Paragraph 3
Entrance to the departure and arrivals sections will largely go unaltered although additional doors will be installed in both. At present, departures has just a check-in desk and a café but the proposal is to move the check-in from the left to the right to accommodate a bag drop area and to re-locate the café to the left of the main entrance. Arrivals will also see a café added as well as an ATM and a car hire business, the last of which means building an extension to provide adequate space.
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Three sentences offering details on the changes to the departure and arrival sections. Notice the use of verbal expressions that precisely describe the main features.
- largely go unaltered (very little change);
- move from …..to ….; (why?) To accommodate …..and re-locate ……;
- added; means building a (why?) to provide …..
Not just describing, also explaining through infinitive verbs.
Paragraph 4
There will be no changes to airport security, passport control and customs; however, several shops will be opened in the departure zone, located on the left upon entering from security. By far the greatest proposed development involves replacing the existing walkway with a sky train and building two branching corridors to the departure gates, which will be more than doubled from the current eight to eighteen.
Ex-IELTS Examiner Review
- Provide more details, this time on security, passport control and customs. Just two sentences.
- Notice here the use of cohesion with “however” contrasting the lack of change to occur in security, control and customs compared to the departure zone.
- The previous paragraph had “although” and “also” as appropriate connectors. This is not an argumentative essay where we’d expect cohesive devices to play a vital role; however, they are always useful in descriptions.
- The second sentence points out the “greatest development” and includes a reference to doubling, more than doubling, capacity.
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