This tutorial is all about Band 9 essays. I found an ex-IELTS examiner and asked her to write me a Band 9 essay with her comments on why these would receive Band 9.
In this tutorial, I’ll walk you through all 4 areas: Task Response, Cohesion and Coherence, Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy.
I’ll give you the question and you can write down your thoughts, plan and your own essay to see if you can find any similarities.
You could even apply the elements to your essays and maybe get your essay corrected: Essay Correction Service.